I was looking through your gallery and this piece really caught my eye. I like how there are several shades of red, offset with extremely subtle shades of blue. It really helps the red pop out at the viewer. The imagery alone is blowing my mind.
This style is one I've never seen and I could look at this forever. The use of pen in this piece definitely attracts my gaze, but doesn't overpower.
I was about to say that the top right corner is lacking and that the absence of work in that area is distracting, but after taking several looks at this painting, I realize that it's perfect the way it is. Everything leads me to look at her eye. The relative plainness in the top right isn't a problem at all.

This is my first critique, so forgive me if it seems mindless. Long story short, this is sick